Chapter 1 of 18
Chapter 1.1 - First time receiving (Part 1) **
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Content warning for this novel:
This is a BL fantasy smut novel intended for mature readers.
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Content Warning: This chapter contains noncon: the gong is unconscious at first.
Rong Jin had been at the inn for several days.
He knew the information he bought from the Tianxia Bulletin couldn’t be wrong. Yan Buwang, the number one evil demon on the Shura list, would definitely pass by today.
As the foremost thug of Shura Valley, Yan Buwang had committed evil deeds beyond measure and taken countless lives. But the critical point was that this man stood over eight chi tall, his body rippled with muscles, and he wielded his Azure Dragon Great Sword to astonishing effect.
Most importantly, he was full of Yang energy….
As these thoughts ran through Rong Jin’s mind, he saw the man he was thinking about walk into the inn. Rong Jin had bribed the innkeeper in advance, preparing a concoction of water laced with knockout drops. The warrior drank it down without suspicion.
Then the man shaded his eyes and shook his head, and with a fierce and sinister gaze, instantly caught sight of Rong Jin hiding in the rafters!
Rong Jin was stunned. He’d administered three times the normal amount of medicine. This man… was truly worthy of being the number one evil devil feared by everyone, Yan Buwang!
A moment later, there was a loud bang. The man failed to resist the drug, and before he had time to swing his sword at Rong Jin, he fell to the ground.
Rong Jin touched his chin. Then he resolutely lifted up the well-built man a little at a time and dragged him to the bed in his rented room.
He quickly untied both of their belts. Song Ziqian of Yaowang Valley told him the knockout drops would only be effective for an hour, and Yan Buwang’s cultivation level was so profound he might wake up even sooner.
Rong Jin looked at the massive demon who was lying helplessly under his body. Then he took a deep breath and pulled off the man’s pants.
Dear lord…
“Song Ziqian, fck your uncle! Why does it take such a big monster to satisfy a gu? You’re going to kill me!”
Then he took off his own pants. With complicated emotions, he separated his slender, white legs and murmured, “What a man among men. You’re so enviably tight.”
The room was almost eerily quiet. Rong Jin’s soft, nervous breathing was only faintly audible. The delicate, attractive young man, who was acting quite strangely, stretched out his hand to measure the comatose Yan Buwang’s sexual instrument. He took some oil with one hand, spread his snow-white buttocks with the other, and slipped the oil-lubricated finger into his own honeyed place, applying the oil carefully and evenly.
Then he aimed his own barely-prepared honeyed opening at Yan Buwang’s incredibly thick, inhuman instrument and joined them together.
It was clearly not voluntary for one of them, but Rong Jin seemed to be enduring some kind of humiliation. He closed his eyes tightly, and his entire body was trembling with shame and fear of the unknown.
The body lying below him still hadn’t moved. However, because of Rong Jin’s action, a semi-circular jade pendant that was hanging around his neck suddenly emerged from the folds of his inner robe. Rong Jin immediately opened his eyes. He stared at that pale green jade pendant for a long time, then he took a deep breath and clenched his teeth. Slowly but firmly, he aimed his unexplored secret place at the huge instrument that was enormous even while its owner was deep asleep. Little by little, he took in the man’s rounded, full front end.
The feeling was indescribable.
Rong Jin gripped the base of the other man’s pillar and felt a burst of tearing pain at his entrance. The man was simply too thick, but so far Rong Jin had only eaten the head of the mushroom. Telling himself that everything was difficult at the beginning, he stared at the jade pendant over his heart for a long time, then forced open his buttocks with one hand, propped his other hand on Yan’s bicep, and slowly continued to sit down. The pain was sharp, but this time, because of the lubrication, Rong Jin successfully took in a large part of the man’s organ.
“Ooh…”
Rong Jin shivered slightly. His delicate white cheeks gradually tinted red, blushing from tension or pain.
There was a light layer of sweat on his body. He lived in Yaowang Valley year round, which gave his sweat a faint smell of medicine. The scent wasn’t unpleasant, but seemed to match Rong Jing’s clean-cut handsome looks and temperament.
After all, this was his first time, and his first encounter was such a prehistoric beast. Rong Jin’s legs suddenly weakened. He abruptly knelt down on Yan Buwang, who was still unconscious. With the strength of Rong Jin’s downward thrust, the instrument which was half-inserted slowly but smoothly slid all the way to the base!
“I… shit…! It hurts….”
Rong Jin gritted his teeth and cursed angrily. His eyes glowed with physiological tears caused by the pain.
And because he was distracted by suffering and psychological shame, Rong Jin didn’t notice the faint struggle of the man below him.
“OK, I have to hurry…” Rong Jin activated his internal strength. He was male and that place in his body wasn’t made to accept or receive. But Rong Jin was a pure Yin body, and that meant he was a perfect furnace for practicing dual cultivation, coupled with the gu technique.
Deliberately ignoring the pain, Rong Jin began to lift his hips up and down, using the dual cultivation technique and slamming his softness against the sleeping giant again and again.
As this rhythm continued, the green jade pendant on his chest began to blossom with a soft glow. However, as the light flickered on and off, Rong Jin, whose eyes were closed at first, vaguely began to sense that something was wrong. The thick instrument inserted in his secret place somehow became even hotter and harder. The hardness and heat made the damn thing twice as thick as it became even more engorged! The pain got worse and worse. It felt like the rod in his body was grinding right through him!
Something was wrong! Rong Jin was horrified to notice that a big, hot hand was now gripping his waist! As his eyes flew open he met Yan Buwang’s gaze, filled with sinister intent and savage desire!
Rong Jin’s scalp tingled. He instinctively tried to pull up and run away, but it was already too late. Yan Buwang used his internal strength to bind Rong Jin’s slender wrists, while one of his hands steadily gripped Rong Jin’s waist. Seeing that the other man wanted to pull away, Yan Buwang pressed down with his palm, reoccupying the secret place that was about to separate from his organ.
“Want to run?” The low, raspy male voice sounded in Rong Jin’s ears. The man’s aura was so ferocious and savage that Rong Jin felt more and more frightened.
No one from Shura Valley would let a morsel of meat that was already in his mouth escape, not to mention that Yan Buwang’s cultivation level was among the highest in Shura Valley!
Was he going to die?
Rong Jin’s mind went blank. Yan Buwang’s temperament was eccentric and impulsive. He killed frequently and according to his mood. Rong Jin knew he’d offended this man, but he never thought he’d be caught in the act and die because of it. But he’d known all along that the path before him would be like crossing a mountain of fire, and he still had to follow it.
Rong Jin clenched his teeth, ripped open his clothes, and completely exposed his pale and tender body, which had been raised in the deep canyons of Yaowang Valley for many years. Then, regardless of the killing intent and fury of the man beneath him, Rong Jin lowered his head and tasted the other man’s mouth with his soft and fiery lips. Yan Buwang trembled for a moment, and Rong Jin moved his mouth to the man’s earlobe and stuck out his tongue, licking and sucking.
The people of Shura Valley didn’t attach any importance to love. What mattered to them was lust and being loyal to their desires. Rong Jin felt the huge instrument inside his body stirring and ready to go. The muscles beneath him were increasingly rigid. He allowed himself a low gasp, and in a slightly hoarse voice he said softly in Yan Buwang’s ear, “Yan Da Ge, I’ve admired you for a long time….”
No matter what method, no matter the means, he had to live!
TL Notes:
This story is NP, high H, heart abuse, 1v1 ending
Just so you know in advance, the plot nosedives around Chapter 20 or 25. The author even admits this in her notes. But in my opinion, the final ending wraps things up well and is enjoyable if you make it that far ♡(˶╹̆ ▿╹̆˵)و✧♡
About my tl style: I stay as close as I can to the raw, but I’ll sometimes take small liberties to make the text flow better and sound more like colloquial English. Other changes (idioms etc.) will be in the tl notes. I haven’t tl’d much smut before, so if you have suggestions or corrections lmk ♥
Chapter 1, 2, and 4 are double length and will be split in half
For additional notes about this project, contact info, and the update schedule, please see the Project Page (っ◔◡◔)っ ♥
Notes:
gu – 蛊 – A legendary venomous insect with mysterious powers that can be implanted in a person’s body. In some stories a gu can bewitch a person, poison them, or drive them insane. (There’s no gu mind control in this story, but plenty of other objectionable things)
gong – 攻 – The top, seme, or insertive partner
shou – 受 – The bottom, uke, or receptive partner
chi – 尺 – a Chinese foot / one-third of a meter
Azure Dragon (Great Sword) – 青龙 – The Azure Dragon, also known as Qinglong in Chinese, is one of the Dragon Gods who represent the mount or chthonic forces of the Five Regions’ Highest Deities. (Wikipedia)
Yang energy – 阳气 – Yáng qì – Yang is the positive/active/male principle in nature. In traditional Chinese culture, qi is believed to be a vital force forming part of every living entity (Wikipedia) In xianxia novels like this one, cultivators make use of qi to perform supernatural techniques, achieve immortality, etc.
oil – 松油 – pine oil – According to Wikipedia, pine oil irritates the skin and mucous membranes. Maybe it’s OK for cultivators to use it as a lubricant, but it sounds like a horrible idea for young and ignorant mortals. That’s why I just said “oil” + tl note. Please assume that any other weird oils or substances you encounter in this series are magical in nature and may not be appropriate for human use. Safety first! (o◕∇◕)o
fck your uncle – 我草你大爷 – If the raw avoids using an actual expletive, the tl will too
Yin – 阴 – The female/passive/negative principle in nature (Wikipedia)
dual cultivation – 双修 – A cultivation technique that uses sexual intercourse to exchange and strengthen qi. It’s usually mutually beneficial (from Immortal Mountain)
furnace – 鼎炉 – Sometimes known as a human cauldron or cultivation vessel – A victim who is drained of their qi by a malicious person through dual cultivation. In this case, the cultivation is very much not beneficial to the furnace, who might be killed or plundered of their energy (from Immortal Mountain)
NP – multiple partners
high H – “H” is from Japanese “ecchi” (エッチ), referring to sexually explicit content. In Japanese and English, “ecchi” can mean content that’s naughty or not quite as perverted or obscene as “hentai” (変態). If you’ve read Chapter 1, you already know this work is not softcore
heart abuse – 虐心 – Refers to content where characters experience suffering and hardships (I wouldn’t call this novel super angsty though, everything is basically an excuse for smut)
Transliterated names, places, and titles—new in this chapter:
Tianxia Bulletin – 天下榜 – Tianxia means land under heaven, the whole world, top of the world, realm, etc. It probably refers to some sort of data collection bureau like those sometimes found in cultivation novels
Yan Buwang – 阎不枉 – Yán Bùwǎng
Shura Valley – 修罗谷 – A shura, or asura, is a type of god or demigod known for being warlike and addicted to dark passions
Yaowang Valley – 药王谷 – Yaowang means “King of Medicine” or “King of Remedies”. There were a few historical doctors who received this title
Song Ziqian – 宋子谦 – Sòng Ziqiān
Yan Da Ge – 阎大哥 – Big Brother Yan – Given the context, this is a flirtatious way to address him
ge – 哥 – older brother – A common way to address an older man of the same generation as you
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