Chapter 5 of 18
Chapter 3 - Getting fucked in the water *
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Content Warning: noncon / dubcon
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Bright red blood dripped into the water. Demonic crimson flowers bloomed one by one, stunning and delicate, but existed only for a moment before they were diluted and disappeared.
The young man in red lost his grip on Rong Jin’s legs and pressed them against his shoulders again. His scarlet eyes stared at the soft entrance as it endured his savage onslaught. The more excited and aroused he got, the harder he worked his hips. The water created drag, which relieved some of Rong Jin’s pain, but didn’t stop the man’s formidable giant from plunging deep into him again and again.
Rong Jin gradually began to burn all over. His body was becoming more and more sensitive, and the most sensitive part of all was the very orifice that was being fucked over and over. When the honed, fully erect weapon was inside him he could even feel the terrible veins that wrapped around its surface.
To make things worse, every time the young man withdrew his burning pillar, he couldn’t fully pull out. The glans at the tip was too big and too hard, and it was sucked and retained by Rong Jin’s smooth and slippery hole.
Then the young man in red uttered an incredibly sexy groan, and a big hand forcefully spread Rong Jin’s ass. Then, as if using that hand as a pivot, the huge, hot branding iron rammed brutally inside him, bringing with it the cold lake water, entering the place that was tightly concealed within the deepest, most delicate part of Rong Jin’s body. It slammed into him over and over, rough and violent, directly attacking the fragile flower core that uniquely belonged to his pure Yin body!
“Ah…!”
He quivered as if he’d been electrified. The agonizing contrast of ice and fire instantly made him scream. An incredibly slick, hot, and lustful liquid gushed from his body, showering the hard, broad glans that fit tightly against his inner walls.
The young man in red thrust again and again, and his ecstasy climbed even higher. But when he saw that Rong Jin had changed from passive compliance to active and lustful participation with his fucking, he gave a wicked laugh. In a low, hoarse voice full of desire, he said, “Is it good… Mmm… Am I fucking you good and hard?”
But Rong Jin had no strength to answer. He just shook his head weakly, hoping the young man in red would let him go.
“No answer?” The young man in red tried to pull out, but Rong Jin’s yin core had already opened, and it innately refused to let go of this thick and stiff weapon that had not yet ejaculated. Rong Jin’s internal walls tightened layer by layer, as if duty-bound to retain the searing hot instrument, tenderly clinging to and grasping the sinful pillar as it violently penetrated him, sucking at it with unbridled enthusiasm.
In an instant the young man in red’s expression turned ferocious. The beautiful muscular lines of his body tightened. He grabbed Rong Jin’s legs and sank himself to the root, exploding in a burst of continuous, fierce fucking. The surrounding lake water rippled outward in circles, and the water splashed on their faces and bodies.
“No… No… Not there! Ah…!”
Lost in the wind and waves of pleasure, Rong Jin stared blankly at the handsome young man who was constantly pounding him. He couldn’t help but reach out and cling to the other man’s neck, leaning on him, matching his fierce rhythm, lifting his hips in harmony with the young man’s thrusts, helping the hard, hot giant plunge directly into the center of his soft and delicate flower core every time.
“Ah… Ha!”
The massive giant gave another hard thrust and finally buried itself in the soft intestinal walls, unable to stop trembling and twitching. Rong Jin’s brain was empty. He only felt the young man’s sex organ pulse a few times, and then the tip that was aimed straight at his flower core sprayed again and again. Hot semen shot into Rong Jin’s belly, and then slowly slipped out from the junction of their bodies and dissolved into the lake water.
Rong Jin’s muscles shivered all over. He gasped a few times as if dying. Then his vision went black and he fainted.
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“Do you have to go?”
Rong Jin faintly heard his own fuzzy voice ringing in his ears, full of concern. “Yaowang Valley has always been isolated from the world. This time, when the secret realm of Mount Shu opens, there are bound to be exotic treasures. Not only will all the immortal cultivation sects in the central plains gather there, the people of Shura Valley are eyeing it too…. I’m afraid you’ll get hurt….”
However, the hazy white-robed figure in front of him was unmoved. The man gently wiped the famous ancient sword called “Tianshu” with a cloth and said quietly, “Even if I didn’t practice the Heartless Path, I wouldn’t change my mind. Rong Jin, this is my destiny. It’s calling me, and I must go.”
Rong Jin felt a vague sense of foreboding. He reached out his hand. For the first time, he couldn’t stop himself from crossing the line. He grabbed the sleeve of the man in white, and his throat rolled for a moment. Thousands of words all merged together into one, but his voice shook and he nearly choked—
“Shixiong!”
The man in white looked quietly at Rong Jin, who was holding his sleeve. After a while he stretched out his hand. Just like when he first found Rong Jin many years ago, a lowly orphan, he reached out and rubbed his hair.
“I’ll come back as soon as possible.”
The white robe vanished, and the hole in Rong Jin’s heart expanded bigger and bigger. Then he woke from his dream with a start, and his face was wet with tears.
Come back as soon as possible? But he waited for so long, he waited until the secret realm of Mount Shu closed, and what did he find in the end…
Rong Jin trembled and clutched the severed jade pendant over his heart, confirming it was still there, like it was the last straw of a drowning man.
“You’re awake.”
Rong Jin was startled by the words. The dream that caused him so much pain almost made him forget there was another person beside him!
He hesitantly looked at the man’s handsome face. He tried to back away a little, but in an instant he nearly fell because of the unbearable pain in his waist.
“Careful.” The young man in red stretched out his hand to steady Rong Jin, then he carefully took a step back. “I am called Duan Yunxiao. I had no intention of… offending your distinguished self. My internal demons were in control of my body and mind. I hope you will give this Yunxiao a chance to make amends.”
Rong Jin was still cautious, but when he spoke, his voice was clear. “Duan Yunxiao, the sect leader of the Jian Sect, the mainstay of righteous cultivators in the central plains. It’s said that after the battle in the secret realm of Mount Shu, you were possessed by your internal demons and disappeared from the mainland. Some say you died. I didn’t think you were still alive.”
Duan Yunxiao smiled somewhat awkwardly. “I thought I would die as well. My unexpected awakening is indeed… to your distinguished self’s credit.” When he observed Rong Jin’s somewhat ashen face, Duan Yunxiao said gravely, “This Yunxiao is not a villain who fears death and cravenly clings to life. If your distinguished self wishes to vent your anger, Yunxiao will stand still and let you stab me three times without dodging.”
“We of Yaowang Valley only save people, we don’t kill.” Rong Jin wearily waved his hand. After pondering a moment, he added, “I’m Rong Jin, a disciple of Yaowang Valley. Here, this is the sign of Yaowang Valley—the greenwood token.”
He took off the token tied around his waist and passed it to Duan Yunxiao for identification. Rong Jin continued, “Since you want to make amends, swear by your name as Duan Yunxiao to do me three favors.”
“I swear.”
Rong Jin froze. The man didn’t even stop to think about it, he immediately agreed. But on second thought, the Jian Sect was known far and wide for its righteousness. Since this man owed him a favor, it might be possible to ask Song Ziqian to let him enter the valley. They might be able to heal his heart demon tribulation.
After thinking about it, Rong Jin looked at Duan Yunxiao and said, “The first thing I need you to do is escort me back to Yaowang Valley.” As if afraid the man might think he was joking, Rong Jin said, “I know it’s inappropriate to ask the leader of the Jian Sect to escort a mere disciple of Yaowang Valley, but we’re still some distance away. I know the formation around Yaowang Valley, but I have to be able to see it—I don’t have a high enough cultivation base to open it right now….”
And just in case he met Yan Buwang along the way…
Rong Jin fell silent for a moment, but Duan Yunxiao came forward and clasped his wrist. The familiar temperature of his fingertips made Rong Jin tremble slightly. He was about to give Duan Yunxiao an angry glare, but the other man was frowning, which was almost unfair given his excessively handsome features.
A deeply worried face stared at Rong Jin. “Your five elements are weakened. What kind of gu technique have you been subjected to? If you don’t treat it in time, you’ll begin to experience the five signs of decay….”
The wild beast from last night was now clasping his wrist with such tenderness? The role reversal was too fast. Rong Jin’s face burned and he inwardly cursed Duan Yunxiao for having such a damned split personality. He forcefully shook off the hand and turned away. With a touch of defiance he said, “That’s why I’m going back to Yaowang Valley.”
Duan Yunxiao’s phoenix eyes narrowed slightly. He stared at Rong Jin’s exposed neck, which showed the traces of having been gnawed by him. Originally snow-white and smooth, it was now purple and blue and blood-stained. A trace of red forced its way into Duan Yunxiao’s eyes. His right hand suddenly twitched, but his left hand clasped it and held it still. His eyes trembled violently, he struggled for a while, but he finally remained silent.
Making love to this person had relieved him of the internal demons that controlled his body, and that was strange in itself. Perhaps he’d learn something useful by following this person to Yaowang Valley.
Duan Yunxiao’s eyes flickered for a moment. He recited Rong Jin’s name silently to himself. Then, in his mind’s eye, he saw images of how he’d captured the younger man by the lake yesterday, how he ruthlessly violated Rong Jin’s body until it was wounded and bruised and pitiful. His Adam’s apple rolled slightly and his heart churned slightly.
However, his expression remained that of the leader of the Jian Sect—incomparably serious, unfathomably deep, upright, and skilled.
Confused, Rong Jin looked back at Duan Yunxiao, who by now had returned to normal. “What are you doing? Let’s go.”
“Mm,” Duan Yunxiao agreed. His face was expressionless, but his irreproachably righteous heart despised his lower body, which was already getting hard.
TL Notes:
righteous cultivators – Those who follow the “righteous path” (正道 – zhèng dào), as opposed to evil cultivators who follow dishonest practices (歪门邪道). But in a lot of cultivation novels, many “righteous cultivators” are sanctimonious greedy graspers, so the label isn’t always accurate. Sometimes all it means is that they don’t routinely bathe in the blood of innocent victims to increase their cultivation
villain – 宵小 – thief / bandit / scoundrel / villain, puny person, curmudgeon
formation – 阵法 – Also known as an “array”, this is essentially a magic circle which casts a continuous area-of-effect spell (from Immortal Mountain)
five elements – 五行 – five phases of Chinese philosophy: wood 木, fire 火, earth 土, metal 金, water 水 – In traditional Chinese medicine, the theory of five elements is used to explain the interrelationships between the body’s organs, meridians, and physiological functions (Baidu)
five signs of decay – 天人五衰 – five failures of heaven and man – In Buddhist thought, it refers to the phenomena that supposedly appear when a person is about to die (Baidu)
split personality – from 精分 – abbreviation for 精神分裂 – schizophrenia, schizo – I went with split personality because it fits the situation better and it’s common for writers to use confuse these terms
phoenix eyes – 凤目 – Eyes whose outer corners incline upwards
making love – 云雨 – clouds and rain – sexual intercourse, making love
Transliterated names, places, and titles—new in this chapter:
central plains, central continent – 中州 – zhōng zhōu – Alternatively: Central Region, central China
Mount Shu – 蜀山
Tianshu – 天殊 – Means something like “Heaven Severing” or “Celestial/Sky Splitting”
Heartless Path – 绝情道 – juéqíng dào – Alternatively: Way of Ruthlessness, the Dao of Cruelty, etc.
shixiong – 师兄 – elder martial brother, senior male fellow student or apprentice / son (older than oneself) of one’s teacher
Duan Yunxiao – 段云萧
your distinguished self – 阁下 – géxià – Alternatively: sir, Your Excellency, Your Majesty, Sire
sect leader – 宗主 – zōngzhǔ – Alternatively: sect master, patriarch
Jian Sect – 剑宗 – jiàn zōng – Literally “Sword Sect”
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